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Post by Brynn Lovegood on Aug 3, 2005 18:39:40 GMT -5
Hello, I am Brynn, And I like to write! ;D
I am writing a story "Alien" Soon to be posted
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Post by Brynn Lovegood on Aug 8, 2005 19:23:31 GMT -5
If you like superman, you will like Alien. Because, well, it is Superman backwards!
I will start of the story!
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Post by Brynn Lovegood on Aug 8, 2005 19:48:44 GMT -5
Eleven years ago, in a land far far away . . .
"Daddy, can I get some Appol Duice!"
Mr. Howsin looked in the mirror at the little boy. "Jack, we will get some apple juice,When we stop at the handy way!"
The truck pulled into a gas staition. They stopped in front of one section.
Mr. Howsin got out of the Ram.
But, they did not know of a horrible reaction happening, in the center of the earth.
Jack got his G.I. Joe out.
The earth was at it's last minute.
"Bang, Bang!"
It was, the end of the world!
Mr. Howsin looked up. "Is something burning?"
Jack looked out of his window and saw the buildings blasting into ruins. Magna was bursting out of holes every few feet. Chunks of Earth were flying in the air.
Jack had one look at his father, thunderstuck all over his face.
Then the next thing he knew, he was flying upward. "DADDY!" He yelled at the window. (TBC)
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Post by xfdd11 on Sept 8, 2005 21:56:24 GMT -5
Wow....that was awesome! Here's the first few sentances of a story I wrote:
"The sun was setting over London, England. Overcast strewn the dark and sinister sky, threatening rain as darkness overtook the city. A man by the name of Thomas Andrews was walking home from work, an emergency room doctor. He entered the underground and took his seet between a teenage boy and an ageing woman. As he went over the events of the past week, his wife and daughter leaving him, all the strange cases at work, when a mysterious noise was heard. It was the sound of..."
That's all I'm giving you now!
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Post by Brynn Lovegood on Sept 10, 2005 20:42:27 GMT -5
ARGGHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! Darnit! I'm going to need therapy!!!! Suspense! Suffacating . . . ***
Okay, here's the next part of my story:
Eleven years later . . .
Creig-es woke up. He sat up strait. "What the heck was that?" he asked himself. He looked out the window at three dim suns. He went down underground to his kitchen. "Hello . . . What's wrong?" said his mother. He bit his lip. "Oh, nothing." He yawned. Ten seconds passed by. Then his mother slammed down her slice of grime that she was cleaning the counter with. "You had a snightmare again! Didn't you?!" He didn't reply, then she said "I know, you are specail! You can lift Ten pound waits! You can run! But it doesn't mean you have to isolate yourself . . ." "MOM! Am I think I know what it is! I think I'm from . . . Somewhere else!" She looked down. "Um, Creig . . . i need to tell you something."
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Post by xfdd11 on Sept 11, 2005 22:24:10 GMT -5
Oooooooh, it's gettin' good...
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Lyssa
Third Year Gryffindor
Love sux big time! (sometimes)
Posts: 108
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Post by Lyssa on Sept 12, 2005 15:22:36 GMT -5
cool story!
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Zanna Gem
First Year Ravenclaw
[M:0]
The Darkness Curse, It hurts others. It makes them fear me. I am the queen of the night...
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Post by Zanna Gem on Feb 20, 2010 2:59:26 GMT -5
Very... Much in Suspence... I LIKE IT!
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